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Old 9th February 2008, 08:10 PM   #1
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Hi Everyone, I am kinda new to AC3D so i just knock toegether a quick scene, I am going to use this in my portfolio for my college interview so I would really appriciate some HONEST feedback on this all hints and tip welcome!
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Old 10th February 2008, 02:31 AM   #2
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Very nice job, especially for some one new to the scene. Two little things. One that barrel on the ground doesnt seem to be fully touching the ground, you might want to re-adjust that. Also, the lighting doesn't make a ton of sense, try making it more dark and gloomy, and I'll bet it will look great.

But overall, really nice work!
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Old 14th February 2008, 04:49 PM   #3
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I agree with Mooseberry... pretty good start, but your lighting is off.

Some objects seem lit from below, others from above. I think you can vastly improve the scene if you adjust your lighting to make it more consistent.
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